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Exploring REM 494

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Exploring REM sleep
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:star::star::star::star::star-half: Overall
:star::star::star::star::star: Vision
:star::star::star::star::star: Originality
:star::star::star::star::star: Technique
:star::star::star::star::star-half: Impact

I hope this critique is helpful and offers valuable insight to the effects of your piece for the viewer. Firstly, I appreciate the composition overall. Great rhythm, movement, and use of value to create depth and interest. The higher contrast around the focal human figure is grounding and pleasing to the eye amidst the different characters surrounding the central figure. I personally take this piece as the many faces, emotions, characters, we carry with us. For me, the 'monsters' are not so much menacing but observing the human. Also, and this is where I feel the impact could be slightly stronger, I judge the round dark shape in front of the human as a bag or case we hold these various facets of our being. I believe we all should see our own interpretations, but maybe the impact could be stronger if the human shape was more defined in what it's holding or the action it's taking. I hope this is helpful, great job!